Oh god. I've been waiting for this story to be posted since you posted the teaser on your birthday, and this chapter could not have come at a worse time, or a better time, depending on the way you view things.
Amazingly moving, more so because of the events of my day, but beautiful none the less. I have tears running down my cheeks, and am anxiously awaiting the next installment.
Jayne's almost vulnerability, his hyper awareness and his lost confusion are amazingly written, and I can feel his hesitation in sharing information; in accepting that Mal and Simon are there in front of him, that Kaylee is back on ship, that they're all there and alive and well.
I'm a horrible review (horribly inconsistent) so if you don't hear from me again, just know that I love this story.