does it work? its kinda a weird(er) format than i usually use, so i need reassurance..and i have other plot bunnies, believe me!

one from R Tam sessions of the Fucked Up Fairy Tales, that i might just work on today at work...the mattress is not to be trusted, you know. *gleeful grin*

and i dont know if this will actually get a sequel. i like the idea that even though Jayne came back, and tried to get them to stop, that they still worship him. because everyone needs heroes.