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alianora ([personal profile] alianora) wrote2005-03-31 10:28 am
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Lost Ficlet: We All Fall Down

Title: We All Fall Down
Fandom: Lost
Spoilers: Deus Ex Machina
Summery: Can you smell it?



Sawyer didnt tell the Doc that the glasses only helped for the first two days (sharp inhaled breath as he fell against the tree and held on while he went blind).

After that, he could smell the burning (like the bodies from the crash. He would never eat bacon again if he could). And it got stronger with every throb of the migraine that left him shaking and sweating in the shade.

Doc had said that (the smell, the fire) could be the sign of a tumor, but Sawyer knew better.

Sawyer watched the kid (Walt, the dad called him) play with the dog (unnatural, shouldn't have survived the crash), and spat out the ashes from his mouth.

Sawyer knew where the fire would come from (innocent eyes burned the raft and smiled). And he knew what he would do (hands striking out against the water as he held the boy under).

Sawyer inhaled the scent of burning flesh, and smiled.

END

[identity profile] literarylemming.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 01:07 am (UTC)(link)
DUDE. You incorporated Sawyer and Creepy!Walt into THE SAME FIC.

*gazing at you, enraptured* You roooooooooooock. *FAINT*

[identity profile] aliaspiral.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 03:12 am (UTC)(link)
bwah! glad i could amaze and enrapture you! this was one of those where i just thought.."huh, what if.." and then im scrambling for a keyboard. glad it worked. :)

and i hope you dont mind i tend to drop you comments when i write new fic..when its c/c and it gets posted TO cc, then i know you will see it. but if its ANYTHING ELSE, i figure you wont check and see it. and that makes my face sad, so..comments!

[identity profile] literarylemming.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
LOL! I don't mind at all! In fact i welcome it! You know me. I *cough* don't really look at my friend's page too much *end cough*

*facepalm* I know. I'm terrible.

[identity profile] aliaspiral.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
I *cough* don't really look at my friend's page too much

hence, the comments!

an no, just because im addicted to my friends page, doesnt mean everyone else. *cough*

im thinking i need some creepy!Boone fic...*ponders* got any links i havent read lately? Seriously, HOW CREEPY was bloody Boone with the "Theresa falls up the stairs, Theresa falls down the stairs.."? AAGH.

[identity profile] literarylemming.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
I have nothing! I want to read Creepy!Boone fic too, so if you find anything, PLEASE tell me. I love Creepy!Boone!

Seriously, HOW CREEPY was bloody Boone with the "Theresa falls up the stairs, Theresa falls down the stairs.."?

OMG I LOVED THAT. It was creepy as hell and just so fucked up. I LOVED it. It was easily my favorite part of last night's episode, and that is SAYING something!

*needs Bloody!Boone icon*

[identity profile] aliaspiral.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
*needs Bloody!Boone icon*

i KNOW. especially to go with my Petey icons and my last Petey story! *Petey hops excitedly at the idea of Bloody!Boone* (hee! i just typed "boobe" instead of "boone." yes, i am 5.)

[identity profile] literarylemming.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 03:56 am (UTC)(link)
*proudly displaying new Bloody!Boone icon*

[identity profile] aliaspiral.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
ooh, pretty! and BLOODY! whee!

I havent found one im completely in love with yet, and im being picky. are they bloody!boone screencaps up at lostmedia? cause then i can make my own!

[identity profile] literarylemming.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 04:02 am (UTC)(link)
You betcha they are! That's where I got the caps for this one! *prompting you*

[identity profile] aliaspiral.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
whee! *runs away*

[identity profile] aliaspiral.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 05:38 am (UTC)(link)
How did i en up with a new Petey icon instead? *facepalm*

[identity profile] literarylemming.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 02:52 pm (UTC)(link)
PETEY! Lookin' GOOD, my man! Er, my orchid-man. Er... My man-eating orchid? Yeah, that one. LOL!

Petey rules all, including our icon-making Muses. ;)

I love it! ;)

[identity profile] aliaspiral.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 03:22 pm (UTC)(link)
i mean, LOOK at him! he has TEETH!

[identity profile] literarylemming.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
And it's like he's growling! Or opening his mouth wide to EAT SOMEBODY! Like Boone!

[identity profile] aliaspiral.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
i KNOW! i was so excited to find that pic of Petey! its like it was waiting for me to find it, just so i could say, "its HIM!"

and i made a Boone icon...and it has Petey in the background..but im not happy with it yet.

[identity profile] literarylemming.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 05:21 pm (UTC)(link)
*Petey is admiring of his latest icon incarnation*

*he even refrains from eating it!*

*he decides to snack on some hubcaps instead*

I MUST SEE this Boone/Petey icon; because that is just too cool. Show me!

[identity profile] aliaspiral.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 06:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Err..its at home on Madmartigan, and im currently at work. Ill play with it more when i get home (ON MY PREEEETY NEW LAPTOP), and yes! Petey is in the background! thats initially how i found that particularly pic..i was looking for something i could insinuate into the background with only people in the know picking up on it..*cough*

[identity profile] ayn-rand-fan-13.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 01:20 am (UTC)(link)
Gah! So creeped out now. Mind if I friend you? I want to know when you write more fic. I loved this.

[identity profile] aliaspiral.livejournal.com 2005-04-01 03:14 am (UTC)(link)
yay! i love creeping people out, and i love getting new friends. friend away! you can check my memories for my other fic..actually dont. go to Silver Fiction (http://www.silverspiral.net/fic/index.php) instead. Newest stuff goes here, but everything eventually gets posted there.

[identity profile] greenleaf17.livejournal.com 2005-04-03 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, freaky Sawyer. Yay! Its very interesting good fic!

[identity profile] aliaspiral.livejournal.com 2005-04-26 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
thanks! glad you liked it!