*Facepalm*

[alianora]

The reason I need betas is because I write lines like this without noticing the hilarity:

Derek nodded, face unexpectedly vulnerable in a way that Stiles hadn't been expecting, and his heart gave an unexpected thump in his chest.

AND UNEXPECTEDLY HE EXPECTED IT!

Seriously. *headdesk*

Comments

[emothy]

/giggling

That's beautiful XD

You have obviously been working very hard on writing!