*Facepalm*
Mar. 25th, 2013 03:18 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
alianoraThe reason I need betas is because I write lines like this without noticing the hilarity:
Derek nodded, face unexpectedly vulnerable in a way that Stiles hadn't been expecting, and his heart gave an unexpected thump in his chest.
AND UNEXPECTEDLY HE EXPECTED IT!
Seriously. *headdesk*
Derek nodded, face unexpectedly vulnerable in a way that Stiles hadn't been expecting, and his heart gave an unexpected thump in his chest.
AND UNEXPECTEDLY HE EXPECTED IT!
Seriously. *headdesk*
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Date: 2013-03-26 06:17 am (UTC)That's beautiful XD
You have obviously been working very hard on writing!